Very nice follow up to the two episodes. Three really, Irresistable, and the two nanite ones. The idea that the visions are what they expected to happen was a good one, it followed with the two experiences canon revealed, and the two you invented for the story were grounded in fact and character personalities. Well done.
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Date: 2006-08-27 03:08 am (UTC)