ext_1596 ([identity profile] mangst.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quasar273 2006-08-27 03:08 am (UTC)

Very nice follow up to the two episodes. Three really, Irresistable, and the two nanite ones. The idea that the visions are what they expected to happen was a good one, it followed with the two experiences canon revealed, and the two you invented for the story were grounded in fact and character personalities. Well done.

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